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A/N: I know I am VERY late for Halloween but this idea got to me after finding out that if I posted this it would be my 50th deviation! Woooo! Party!
Anyway! This indeed a LEMON. DO NOT LIKE THEN DO NOT READ!!! For people who do like lemons: Please enjoy :3 and tell me if my lemons are improving (:
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-You thought that going to this party was the most stupidest thing ever. Halloween was done and over with yet the other countries still wanted to celebrate it with a party. They probably just organized it so that they could get off of work and doing paper work. You don't blame them though.
-You were apparently the last person to he there since you saw many cars parked at England's place. The bright strobe lights could be seen from the living room window and you could feel the vibrating of the music rumbling the ground. As you opened the door you were met with the sight of all the countries dressed in their halloween costumes (just imagine them in their 2010 costume designs) dancing to the beat of the music.
-It wasn't long until you were engulfed in the ocean of dancing countries. You had no other choice but to dance along to the load music. One second you were dancing next to England who was already drunk and giving you weird looks and the next second you were surrounded by the Bad Touch Trio as they placed you in their small circle and started to hump you in certain areas they you wouldn't like to talk about. 
-This was a party right? You should enjoy yourself. That's when you let all worries go and danced with America as he held your hips and kissed your neck as the two of you danced together.
-He then gave you over to Canada who had apparently left his shy and calm personality at home. He gently groped your boobs and let his fingers glide downward around your stomach area. Somehow his fingers worked silently on your shirt as you soon found it on the ground.
-You no longer had control on what was going on. Then you started to realize that you were the only girl here. Did they prepare this on purpose? Of course they did! No wonder they were all on you. But you couldn't back down now. Being surrounded you had no escape. The only thing you could do was just go along with their dirty plan.
"Dance with me Bella!" Italy said happily as he placed his smooth hands on your hips and started to dance with you.
-England was pretty sneaky considering the fact that he managed to get you out of your pants. With that he lifted your legs up to we're they wrapped around his waist. He pressed you against the wall and started to grind into you through your panties.
"You like it this way don't you?" England said with a slight slur as he proceeded his movements.
-Your body trembled at his touch as you were constantly banged into the wall. You felt as if your body was on fire. You never felt this way before in your life.
"Do you mind if I drink your blood?" Romania asked teasingly as he gave you a toothy grin.
-You gave one slight nod before you had a sharp fang sink into your soft skin and start to draw blood. You never knew that something so strange could feel so good. He was slightly sucking on the skin until it was turning a bruised color as he left a hickey in the area.
-With the help of some other countries Russia managed to get you out of your remaining articles of clothing. China then gently rubbed your woman hood as he laid you onto the ground and let his fingers massage the now wet overly wet area. He immediately went directly to 3fingers as he thrusted them sharply inward.
-Your body trembled in both pain and delight as his fingers thrusted quickly into you. Before your mind could grasp the feeling China's fingers were then replaced with Prussia's member.
-He had you rocking with his body as you were already feeling so close. He kept thrusting faster and faster and your bodies kept connecting together. You loved the way he was hitting just the right spot repeatedly. Your stomach began to form a knot as you suddenly came onto both yourself and Prussia. He then came into you in return. 
-Not able to take anymore of the sexual involvements you feel into a quiet slumber. Maybe you guys should have parties more often.
Woooo! My 50th deviation!! Hope you like it even though it sucks and its not even halloween :iconiggyisnotamusedplz:
So yea....
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:iconsabielovesfrozen:
Sabielovesfrozen Featured By Owner 2 days ago   Writer
W-WHAT THE FRICKING HECK HAPPENED
I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M DOING WITH LIFE BUT HELL NO
PLEASE NO
THIS IS WELL WRITTEN YES, BUT STILL.............
whywahthwydbwifbflkbrgroqini 'lrjv qvgilmribg-ardipmehjk
*completely destroys keyboard*
Well thats the end of me
(good lemon though)
~Venice
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:iconwolfygirl9:
wolfygirl9 Featured By Owner 3 days ago
O.o wat wat wat wat wat wat wat wat wat wat ect...
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:icondestinymace:
DestinyMace Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015
I wouldn't mind Prussia humping me xD
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:icontechnolgiccheeto:
TechnolgicCheeto Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...
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:iconcyndertenkaicourage:
CynderTenkaiCourage Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Student Artist
Why are peopke critisizing it badly!! It's a good lemon in my opinion. At least you wrote it, you could've writen nothing and left us hanging. You did a good job!
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:iconparalyzed-chan:
Paralyzed-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
WHERE IS THAT RAPE WHISTLE?
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:icongeekgal123:
geekgal123 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Student General Artist
R.a.p.e. whistle, where is it when you need it
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:icon13stepping:
13stepping Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
It's a shame Germany wasn't there.
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:iconmonkeypoooo:
MONKEYPOOOO Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconfrance-sneaky:
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:icondragonstorm118:
DragonStorm118 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
 France (Sneaky) [V2] 
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:iconrinmi14:
rinmi14 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Student Writer
nice
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:iconalysthewolf:
AlysTheWolf Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Um... There are just no words to describe what I'm thinking. What the crap just happened?
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:iconthylacineappocalipse:
ThylacineAppocalipse Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just..wut?
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:icon8888deaththegirl8888:
um... O////////////O i feel...i dont even know but... O_O HOLY SHIT! THIS WAS AWESOME! XD HAHAHAHAHA!! Blush Big Fool Emoji-06 (Blush) [V2] :blushing: Lily Blushing Excited Blush happy mew blushed Anime Emoji (Blush Oh yay dance) [V6] Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed Italy (Globe Dance) [V2] England (Makes fun of) [V3] Bad Touch Trio Icon England (Hawt Bodeh) [V2] England (Shy Strip) [V2] Russia (Curse) [V2] Hetalia: Allies Icon 
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:iconitalyisadolphin:
italyisadolphin Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
..........one question.


Why?
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:icontransformicerawks11:
transformicerawks11 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
...
That fucking escalated quickly.
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:iconcuppycakessss:
CuppyCakessss Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student Artist
WELL NOW IM GONNA TELL THE COUNTRIES TO READ THIS!

Romano: DAFAQ?!?!? O//////////ORomano (Cries) [V4] 

China: AIYA!! WHAT AM I DOING WITH MY FINGERS-ARU?!?! Rin8- July 

PRUSSIA: KESESESE!!~ VITAL REGIONS CLAIMED!! APH: Onion Prussia 
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:icondawnsoffreedom:
dawnsoffreedom Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what about the rest?
btw this is the first time china didn't make me call him master he dose own me because i'm  a pokehuman 
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:iconthefiredragonesreshi:
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Edited Feb 8, 2015  Student Filmographer
I'm. Poke shifter thingy (someone who can turn into a half pokemon and half human or an actual whole pokemon)..... Witchcraft! England was here
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:icondawnsoffreedom:
dawnsoffreedom Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i was born one 
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:iconthefiredragonesreshi:
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Student Filmographer
Me too
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:icondawnsoffreedom:
dawnsoffreedom Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i can turn into every pokemon
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:iconthefiredragonesreshi:
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Student Filmographer
Me too what the heck is going on?
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:icondawnsoffreedom:
dawnsoffreedom Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
how i thought i was the only one 
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FairyTail4322 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Totally Prussia therd
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:iconasexualsatwork:
AsexualsAtWork Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Way to make a woman seem like a whore. This "story" of yours has absolutely no plot development, and therefore has no real value. Try again, next time with more plot and less disgusting and unsatisfactory explanation.
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:iconcielfan349895:
Cielfan349895 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I had no problems with it but I see where your are coming from. I don't see any plot development but i believe that after a while no one is in there right mind during sex. I can see the whore thing too but I just had no issues with it honestly. I don't care what anyone said though you have a right to express your opinion so I won't tell you to calm down or something because that is more rude than any comment made. Thank you for your opinion.
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:iconsacredninjabunny:
SacredNinjaBunny Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you need to calm down okay??
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:iconhetalialover9001:
hetalialover9001 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
To me it seems like a crack fic, so no plot development is needed imo but it's the author's choice as to whether it's crack or serious
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:iconchibi-germany7:
chibi-germany7 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gang bang much?
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:iconlokislove12345:
LokisLove12345 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You forgot America X(
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:iconkierasanderman321:
kierasanderman321 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015
No she didn't. America was in there 
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:iconlokislove12345:
LokisLove12345 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Oh. . . . I must've missed it.
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:iconunwanted-immortals:
Unwanted-immortals Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
Halloween party surprise we were just kidding we're gonna fuk u
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:iconsuicidescreamer1:
Suicidescreamer1 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Talk about a gangbang 
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:iconaayathesnake01:
aayathesnake01 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
...well...guess who feels like a whore...
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:icontexancowgirluvslovi:
TexanCowgirluvsLovi Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A group fuck hidden as a 'party'?

..................

No plausible explanation to how this was created is there?
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:iconthatgirlonf1re:
thatgirlonf1re Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student Filmographer
Wait what just happened? 
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:iconanimelover2467:
AnimeLover2467 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
........ What the heck just happened?
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:iconcandythekiller8105:
candythekiller8105 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
is romano there?
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:iconmercixnekoxdoll9:
mercixnekoxdoll9 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*nosebleed* ..,
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:iconkat-of-awsomeness:
Kat-of-awsomeness Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm getting on my nope-van and going to fuckthis-ville
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:iconenglandamericaitaly:
EnglandAmericaItaly Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
that comment made my night :D XD lol
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:iconzoethegreat8668:
zoethegreat8668 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014   General Artist
what? I'm so confused just WAT
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:iconcrazymustache:
CrazyMustache Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
...my ovaries are confused...
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:iconzoethegreat8668:
zoethegreat8668 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014   General Artist
Same...vampires, and being banged against a wall? and it feeling good? wtf?
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:iconragingpurplecrayon:
ragingpurplecrayon Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There were vampires......?
I think I zoned out when I was reading this...... I zone out a lot...,,
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:iconcrazymustache:
CrazyMustache Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
Yeahhh...I don't know what to say about this...
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:iconzoethegreat8668:
zoethegreat8668 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014   General Artist
*Didn't mean banged against the wall that way okay
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