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A/N: I know I am VERY late for Halloween but this idea got to me after finding out that if I posted this it would be my 50th deviation! Woooo! Party!
Anyway! This indeed a LEMON. DO NOT LIKE THEN DO NOT READ!!! For people who do like lemons: Please enjoy :3 and tell me if my lemons are improving (:
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-You thought that going to this party was the most stupidest thing ever. Halloween was done and over with yet the other countries still wanted to celebrate it with a party. They probably just organized it so that they could get off of work and doing paper work. You don't blame them though.
-You were apparently the last person to he there since you saw many cars parked at England's place. The bright strobe lights could be seen from the living room window and you could feel the vibrating of the music rumbling the ground. As you opened the door you were met with the sight of all the countries dressed in their halloween costumes (just imagine them in their 2010 costume designs) dancing to the beat of the music.
-It wasn't long until you were engulfed in the ocean of dancing countries. You had no other choice but to dance along to the load music. One second you were dancing next to England who was already drunk and giving you weird looks and the next second you were surrounded by the Bad Touch Trio as they placed you in their small circle and started to hump you in certain areas they you wouldn't like to talk about. 
-This was a party right? You should enjoy yourself. That's when you let all worries go and danced with America as he held your hips and kissed your neck as the two of you danced together.
-He then gave you over to Canada who had apparently left his shy and calm personality at home. He gently groped your boobs and let his fingers glide downward around your stomach area. Somehow his fingers worked silently on your shirt as you soon found it on the ground.
-You no longer had control on what was going on. Then you started to realize that you were the only girl here. Did they prepare this on purpose? Of course they did! No wonder they were all on you. But you couldn't back down now. Being surrounded you had no escape. The only thing you could do was just go along with their dirty plan.
"Dance with me Bella!" Italy said happily as he placed his smooth hands on your hips and started to dance with you.
-England was pretty sneaky considering the fact that he managed to get you out of your pants. With that he lifted your legs up to we're they wrapped around his waist. He pressed you against the wall and started to grind into you through your panties.
"You like it this way don't you?" England said with a slight slur as he proceeded his movements.
-Your body trembled at his touch as you were constantly banged into the wall. You felt as if your body was on fire. You never felt this way before in your life.
"Do you mind if I drink your blood?" Romania asked teasingly as he gave you a toothy grin.
-You gave one slight nod before you had a sharp fang sink into your soft skin and start to draw blood. You never knew that something so strange could feel so good. He was slightly sucking on the skin until it was turning a bruised color as he left a hickey in the area.
-With the help of some other countries Russia managed to get you out of your remaining articles of clothing. China then gently rubbed your woman hood as he laid you onto the ground and let his fingers massage the now wet overly wet area. He immediately went directly to 3fingers as he thrusted them sharply inward.
-Your body trembled in both pain and delight as his fingers thrusted quickly into you. Before your mind could grasp the feeling China's fingers were then replaced with Prussia's member.
-He had you rocking with his body as you were already feeling so close. He kept thrusting faster and faster and your bodies kept connecting together. You loved the way he was hitting just the right spot repeatedly. Your stomach began to form a knot as you suddenly came onto both yourself and Prussia. He then came into you in return. 
-Not able to take anymore of the sexual involvements you feel into a quiet slumber. Maybe you guys should have parties more often.
Woooo! My 50th deviation!! Hope you like it even though it sucks and its not even halloween :iconiggyisnotamusedplz:
So yea....
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:icondawnsoffreedom:
dawnsoffreedom Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
esp: (my oc that can turn into an espeon) Ahhhhhhh~
Japan&America : *listening to this with a big as f*** nose bleed*
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Hetalianforlife14 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
((HAHA AGAIN XD


Im crying, that Iggy icon

LOOK AT HIS SQUISHED UP FACE XD))
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Paupau224 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
OMG! Can someone get me some tissues... There's blood dripping from my nose! LOL! 
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:iconvcosmi:
vcosmi Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
Romania.... Why?
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:iconvcosmi:
vcosmi Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
I only want to do PRUSSIA THATS ALL!!!
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:iconvcosmi:
vcosmi Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
This is kind of a dream to me.... BIG BROTHER AMERICA WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME!! I know where not blood related but still!!! YOUR LIKE A TRUE BROTHER!!! I love the part where Prussia, my lover, comes in...
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Mayajones18 Featured By Owner May 24, 2015
I read the story out loud because Japan made me read it
me: B-big brother r-Russia? What? >~<
everyone : 0///0
me: PERVERTS!! BIG BROTHER RUSSIA MAKE THEM STOP STARING AT ME LIKE THAT! *jumps up and down like a child*
Finland: Maya your making your boobs bounce ^\\\^
france: oh honhonhon  and your boobs are as big as Ukraine's
big brother Russia: *chases everyone out and hits s few with his pipe*
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Randomstuffs2004 Featured By Owner May 22, 2015  Student Artist
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So...much...blood on the laptop! *grabs boxes of tisues*Nice story!
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melissasmith11 Featured By Owner May 22, 2015
I LOVE this especially since the bang bang happened with my beloved PrussiaPrussia (Evil Sneaky Plan) [V5] Prussia (Money Talk) [V1] Hetalia Prussia (Laugh) APH Prussia: Sparkles Prussia (Explaining) [V4] Prussia (Arrives to explain) [V3] APH Prussia Laughing YOU ATTACK AUSTRIA, YOU DIE. Prussia Talking Icon Prussia  its Awsome Pixel 
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:iconvcosmi:
vcosmi Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
Same!!!
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:iconinsane-drawings:
InSaNe-DrAwInGs Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like the story but please put mature content on it ,
some kids should not be reading this can see it
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:iconkirstenthefgt:
kirsten: i-im a fucking slut!
2pkirsten: ew i thought were the classy one god damit!
it was writen well but dude my last party i sat in the corner drinking a thermus of tea!
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:iconmelissasmith11:
melissasmith11 Featured By Owner May 22, 2015
That's what I usually do at parties I'll just sit in my Emo-corner eating pizza and drinking punch just silently judging people until it gets overwhelming and I go on my computer in my bedroom.One time my grandma didn't know where I was because she was late and no one could find me and they thought that I left my own B-day party but I was just reading fan fiction and listening to nightcore and when I came back out my friends and family were so confused and I was just like "I was in my room did you not look for me this is not a big house."and I just got punch and went back in my room.
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TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Student Filmographer
My Name is Kirsten too XD but I normally use my OC's name aka Cassiopeia.
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:iconthefiredragonesreshi:
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Student Filmographer
My name is kirsten! XD 
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kirstenthefgt Featured By Owner May 2, 2015
we shall band together to form THE KIRSTEN SQUAD! (well kirsten is my oc's humen name i really like it)
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:iconthefiredragonesreshi:
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  Student Filmographer
It's my actual name. My OC's name us Cassiopeia I really like the name.
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:iconsabielovesfrozen:
Sabielovesfrozen Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015   Writer
W-WHAT THE FRICKING HECK HAPPENED
I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M DOING WITH LIFE BUT HELL NO
PLEASE NO
THIS IS WELL WRITTEN YES, BUT STILL.............
whywahthwydbwifbflkbrgroqini 'lrjv qvgilmribg-ardipmehjk
*completely destroys keyboard*
Well thats the end of me
(good lemon though)
~Venice
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:iconwolfygirl9:
wolfygirl9 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015
O.o wat wat wat wat wat wat wat wat wat wat ect...
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DestinyMace Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015
I wouldn't mind Prussia humping me xD
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:icontechnolgiccheeto:
TechnolgicCheeto Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...
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:iconcyndertenkaicourage:
CynderTenkaiCourage Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Student Artist
Why are peopke critisizing it badly!! It's a good lemon in my opinion. At least you wrote it, you could've writen nothing and left us hanging. You did a good job!
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Sabielovesfrozen Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015   Writer
Well yeah it is a good lemon but still.......it's a lemon that's why people are freaking out
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CynderTenkaiCourage Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2015  Student Artist
Ya got a point
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:iconsabielovesfrozen:
Sabielovesfrozen Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015   Writer
THanks
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:iconcyndertenkaicourage:
CynderTenkaiCourage Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Student Artist
(⊙ω⊙)
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:iconparalyzed-chan:
Paralyzed-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015
WHERE IS THAT RAPE WHISTLE?
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:icongeekgal123:
geekgal123 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Student General Artist
R.a.p.e. whistle, where is it when you need it
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:icon13stepping:
13stepping Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
It's a shame Germany wasn't there.
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:iconmonkeypoooo:
MONKEYPOOOO Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconfrance-sneaky:
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DragonStorm118 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
 France (Sneaky) [V2] 
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:iconrinmi14:
rinmi14 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Student Writer
nice
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:iconalysthewolf:
AlysTheWolf Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Um... There are just no words to describe what I'm thinking. What the crap just happened?
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:iconthylacineappocalipse:
ThylacineAppocalipse Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just..wut?
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:icon8888deaththegirl8888:
um... O////////////O i feel...i dont even know but... O_O HOLY SHIT! THIS WAS AWESOME! XD HAHAHAHAHA!! Blush Big Fool Emoji-06 (Blush) [V2] :blushing: Lily Blushing Excited Blush happy mew blushed Anime Emoji (Blush Oh yay dance) [V6] Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed Italy (Globe Dance) [V2] England (Makes fun of) [V3] Bad Touch Trio Icon England (Hawt Bodeh) [V2] England (Shy Strip) [V2] Russia (Curse) [V2] Hetalia: Allies Icon 
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italyisadolphin Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
..........one question.


Why?
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:icontransformicerawks11:
transformicerawks11 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
...
That fucking escalated quickly.
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CuppyCakessss Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student Artist
WELL NOW IM GONNA TELL THE COUNTRIES TO READ THIS!

Romano: DAFAQ?!?!? O//////////ORomano (Cries) [V4] 

China: AIYA!! WHAT AM I DOING WITH MY FINGERS-ARU?!?! Rin8- July 

PRUSSIA: KESESESE!!~ VITAL REGIONS CLAIMED!! APH: Onion Prussia 
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dawnsoffreedom Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what about the rest?
btw this is the first time china didn't make me call him master he dose own me because i'm  a pokehuman 
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TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Edited Feb 8, 2015  Student Filmographer
I'm. Poke shifter thingy (someone who can turn into a half pokemon and half human or an actual whole pokemon)..... Witchcraft! England was here
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dawnsoffreedom Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i was born one 
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:iconthefiredragonesreshi:
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Student Filmographer
Me too
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:icondawnsoffreedom:
dawnsoffreedom Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i can turn into every pokemon
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:iconthefiredragonesreshi:
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Student Filmographer
Me too what the heck is going on?
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:icondawnsoffreedom:
dawnsoffreedom Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
how i thought i was the only one 
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FairyTail4322 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Totally Prussia therd
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AsexualsAtWork Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Way to make a woman seem like a whore. This "story" of yours has absolutely no plot development, and therefore has no real value. Try again, next time with more plot and less disgusting and unsatisfactory explanation.
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Cielfan349895 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I had no problems with it but I see where your are coming from. I don't see any plot development but i believe that after a while no one is in there right mind during sex. I can see the whore thing too but I just had no issues with it honestly. I don't care what anyone said though you have a right to express your opinion so I won't tell you to calm down or something because that is more rude than any comment made. Thank you for your opinion.
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SacredNinjaBunny Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you need to calm down okay??
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